I held death in my arms once. In February 2008 the tiny body of my nephew, born 20 weeks early, was brought to me wrapped in a blanket in sister-in-law Deanna’s hospital room. In my womb a 20-week-old baby kicked. It felt like the hardest thing I would ever have to do, continue growing life in the wake of death.
I was wrong.
Walking Mom through the shadow of death while living life became the new hardest thing. It involved watching, waiting, and wondering how it would end.
The following excerpts from my journal capture the essence of that walk:
Mom stayed in her bed for most of the day; then, she came out at midnight for cookies and milk.
This is a slow, slow burn. A long agonizing goodbye. I wonder what it will take for Mom to release, let go, and be embraced in the arms of love.
It feels like we have false starts, practice vigils, trial runs galore. Descend, plateau, level, recover.
It has been the hardest thing to keep living and functioning daily with the continual, “This is it, just kidding!” moments. I feel tired, flat, foolish. I understand why weddings and funerals tear families apart.
This morning Mom took a turn, and it was the last time I helped her get dressed.
This is a confusing, scary time. Mom is suffering. She is in pain. Prayers for her to be taken home quickly. We are all weary. This journey is long and hard.
I did night duty from 3 to 7 a.m. Mom put the active in active dying, tossing and turning to and fro. Wanting to get up. Stand. Go to the bathroom. Fearful and unsettled. I read and sang songs to her. Psalms. Reassurances. Breaths. Prayers. I rubbed and soothed and sang. She saw water and asked if I was standing in it or next to it. She asked if she could drive. She asked if I talked to all the people. She told me she liked my hair.
Her final words to me were, “You’re sweet.”
She was in so much pain. Today the pain was managed at the cost of consciousness. She slips away.
I can’t believe how long she lingers. It is exhausting doing these overnights and daily care.
I feel weary that on top of Mom dying, we have to face the reality of living.
I am proud of myself for starting new clients, renewing existing clients, and continuing to engage life. I am most agitated when I try to control the situation. There is absolutely nothing we can control right now. Anytime I think that a certain death scenario would be nice, I realize I cannot hold the outcome, and it only sets me up for frustration and disappointment. How messed up is it to be frustrated that my mom still lives?
It’s the final Saturday of February, seven months after the initial scan. Steve and I fill our Starbucks mugs and walk across town to say goodbye to the out-of-town family. We eat cinnamon rolls and drink coffee together. Sharon, Stephanie, and I sing “The Storm” by Bronze Radio Return. Everyone leaves. The locals remain, a skeleton crew left to tend the dying and support the living.
On Sunday, the final day of February, Mom is still here. I go over to help with her care. What’s new is that now she is fully bedridden and unconscious. Nick removes the transport chair and bedside commode to the basement. Church at Mom’s bedside is different from the playful, happy service of two weeks ago.
This long goodbye is hard. I look at a picture of Mom from the beginning, and it looks nothing like the Mom of the end, skeletal and corpse-like.
On Thursday, March 4, I spent the night at Mom and Dad’s with my brother. At bedtime I said, “Wake me if you need help in the middle of the night.” I went to sleep and woke up at 7 a.m.
I walked downstairs to find Nick asleep on the couch. Tiptoeing past, I began to help Dad with Mom’s morning care. At 9 a.m. I noticed that my youngest sister went live on Facebook to sing Coldplay’s “The Scientist.”
After watching, I thought Mom would enjoy listening to it. Dad, Nick, Deanna, and I gathered around her bed. Holding the phone in front of Mom, I pushed play.
Come up to meet you, tell you I’m sorry
You don’t know how lovely you are…
Mom’s breathing shifted. The room grew still except for the sound of Stephanie singing and Mom breathing.
Nobody said it was easy
It’s such a shame for us to part…
I sat on Mom’s left, my arm growing stiff from holding the phone. Deanna sat on the right. Nick stood beside me toward the foot of the bed, and Dad stood on the opposite side, also toward the foot. We began looking around, eyes shifting to Mom, then to each other. Stephanie continued singing, “No one ever said it would be so hard…”
Mom finally left us. Dad saw her leave in two sighs. My vantage point was not as peaceful. I quickly pulled tissues from the box beside me to wipe her mouth.
“I wonder how long this stage of dying lasts?” I thought.
Then she was gone.
And it was over.
And I was there.
Holding Death.
Julie McClay lives in Virginia’s Shenandoah Valley with her partner of 31 years, four of their eight children, and six fur and feather babies. Two precious grandchildren bring deep joy and delight. Julie is a lover of stories and words. She serves clients, both in person and virtually, through Heart Path Story Coaching, offering a creative space of kindness, curiosity, and Story Work. Writing and Art Journaling are key elements of her process.
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Thank you for bearing witness to this space with me.
Familiar place for me as I held death Easter Sunday as my husband slipped away. Your journal entries were similar to mine as I listed the “lasts” of life that John would experience. Thank you for putting words to the profound mystery of death that you have walked. I’m sorry for the loss of your mother even as you hold the miracle of eternal life. Bless you in the days ahead as your heart holds the memories of both death and life as the two seem to collide in a single breath. Love, Mary Jane❤️
Thank you, Dear Mary Jane. You and your sparkly shoes and bright smile hold a special place in my heart from my time at The Journey years ago. I am so sorry for the loss of your husband. I see you in the complexity of losing a loved one, grieving what was, seeing the suffering set free, and continuing to walk in the land of the living. May you also be blessed in the year of firsts ahead of you and know that you are seen and loved.
Mary Jane, Please accept my condolences.
Julie…I (we) have been anticipating her final breaths throughout your entire series of breathtaking posts reflecting on your mom’s journey toward Home.
This particular reflection stirs so much within me with its raw, vivid, unkind-but-abundantly-kind (because watching someone deteriorate is as agonizing as it gets, yet you shouldered it with thorough devotion) naming of the twisted and prolonged realities of a bedside vigil.
Again, I cannot imagine a more honest, compassionate, intentional daughter as you have been and continue to be, especially in The Hardest Spaces.
Sacred. Wholly sacred.
Thank you for your eyes, heart, and witness over this year of writing. It helps me to see that it really was an agonizing, heartbreaking time. Honest. Compassionate. Intentional. What kindness. Thank you.
Julie, the words that come to mind are poignant salted with solace. I cared for both my parents in their last earthly days. Both towers of strength and love to me became hopeless and dependent. Through it all while managing this journey with them alone, I was so thankful to have the opportunity to give back the love and care they had so freely given me my entire life. It was all of the things you described – hard, painful, exhausting, watching, waiting, caring, agonizing, scary, etc. – but it was also, for me, the very last chance I had to say thank you with ceaseless care and no complaint.
The mourning never ends. Daily, I miss my dad’s wisdom and my mother’s gentle love and support. I see them often in my children. I’m reminded frequently how much I’m like my dad, and it blesses me. I see my mother in me as I interact with unconditional love with my children and grandchildren.
Thanks for opening this memory path for me this morning. May the road rise to meet you, and God hold you in the palm of his hand.
What a precious gift you gave to your parents and also received in the most sacred of spaces. I am so glad for the legacy of wisdom and love you were given that shines through you and the generation that follows. I continue to discover new ways my mom is with me and my children and grandchildren even now. We say, “Grandma Caryn is close” or “Grandma Caryn would be proud.” Escpecially in the Costco runs to stock up pantries ;). It’s one of the many ways she loved. Thank you for entering this place with me.